Monday, August 31, 2020

Voices(If Only Your Heart Vibrates...) Comments

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I wasn't with you
When all blood, tears and sweats fallen
I wasn't with you
When your dream was a dream
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Unwritten Soul
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Susan Williams 12 October 2020

To ones who may come after us, We try to keep the sky high and land wide We let your dream expand infinitely in our blessing country Dont have to struggle again- - the duty of a citizen who has been blessed to live in a country in whose development and ideals can take part in- - - - - - - -may we keep our promises

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Adilson Pinto 27 September 2020

Hello my dear friend: how long without talking to you! Just now I am here again, because of my life, so full of good and bad surprises! Yes, here we have a marvelous nationalist poem! Yes, it is wonderful when we are free! I can see yor thankful heart in these lines, I can see your bright face, I can see your happy smile! So I am happy with you! Strong hug from Brazil!

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Muhammad Ali 17 September 2020

Freedom is a blessing. nice poem, ending with a beautiful prayer. .. If.. freedom is to be freed of OTHER nations. but WHY there are other nations. Humanity is not a nation enough, and why! .. To be caged with happiness in His will, if it is so simple. ...just some thoughts.

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Hans Vr 13 September 2020

Wonderful poem, Soul. I feel so blessed to live in such a wonderful country.

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Terry Craddock 03 September 2020

The dream of peace cannot, must never be written out of our souls, the freedom to learn to love to live life; to enjoy multi layered diversity, to embrace diversity individuality in all cultures countries with tolerant harmony; to celebrate the sacred gift of life, to elevate all people into beautified prosperity, ...

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Terry Craddock 03 September 2020

with kindness happiness understanding sown into all lives, is beauty on earth personified; because the dream of an eternity of peace upon this earth, must be a sanctified global goal realized upon a future earth blessed by all.

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Mj Lemon 02 September 2020

Freedom standing in the company of peace and tolerance...such a magnificent expression of what all can attain. A wonderful verse, a great tribute, Soul!

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Yoonoos Peerbocus 01 September 2020

we survive in our dream but the contrast is the hard reality...I like the intrigue and word-twist

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M Asim Nehal 31 August 2020

Only a pious and pure Soul will pray to the Almighty for Love and peace and you are one. Your tribute is to many freedom fighters who lost their lives for a great cause so that their next generation enjoy the freedom. But what we see now is a sorry state of affairs (Politically, economically and socially) on all fronts. A thought provoking poem. Loved it " Pious Soul " ....1000++

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