As I lie on my bed outstretched,
Gazing at the covered up sky;
Some voices strange I hear in my head,
Sizzling, rumbling, laughing by
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A poem which draws you in, like the voices themselves, to a train of thought...... it is like a dream.
Well written and composed, I liked the buildup and positive ending to a dark poem.
It is a very real and deep poem, we all experience the voices from time to time, the light is always there whenever we need it and want it. Beautiful Shouvik as always! ! Love and Light
This one seems dark and powerful with the voices that won't stop, but as soon as you turn on the light there gone. I like it, Great poem! ! !
A pinch of each different flavors can spice a poem so nice...at least it works on you...nicely taste and u are good chef here...fresh words on the table! LOL_Unwritten Soul
We get whatever we wish to struggle for. Good poem, well-penned.
We get whatever we wish to struggle for. Good poem, well-penned.
This poem is well written. Good. But the voices that this person hears, are not good. At least, at last he/she woke up and on the light to say goodbye to the voices.. Nice plot..Thank you for the invitation, Roy.
A perfect poem! It has the mystery and the sense of impeding but not allowed to happen doom.I love this magic incantation poem.You're my favorite poet
great poem! ! ! voices in silence :)