Wednesday, April 10, 2013

...Voiceless... Comments

Rating: 4.5

You said 'I'll meet you 
On a Sunday afternoon'
Exalted like a happy child, for this encountering I was.
Neatly I brushed my hair
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Besa Dede
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Kelly Seale 11 May 2013

What sad fateful event kept him away from you... Your heart breaks as he fades away... lipstick wasted on such a das day. -Besa, this has so many descriptive twists and turns, ups and downs... it's an amazing, well written piece. Great Ink! ; -) Kelly.

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Shahzia Batool 22 April 2013

intense! ! ! sad, and very intense! ! ! but studded with much poetic beauty, it has the flavor of pathos, poem, short-story, drama....all in one! ! !

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