Thursday, April 8, 2010

Voice Of Thrashed Soul Comments

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Bruises on my body
Scars on my wrists,
Yelling surrounds my head
Nothing better will come of this.
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Aditya Pathak 'particle'
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Parth Arora 16 May 2010

good... the agony comes forward strongly in the verse... however can't make out why the 'ever smiling, ever cheerful' ADITYA PATHAK writes this... i thought it was my monopoly.... thanks for removing misconceptions though.. would be glad if you condescend to give my latest compositions a read up as well....and post your comments...

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