Voice Of Soul Comments

A sublime start with a nice poem, Surbhi Bawaria (ahana) . You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

creative.... xcelent flow! ! !

thanks Sanu....plz do read my poem Pain Of Heart..... :)

Hey! I'm your soul don't let me down good job....

thanks Dave for your appreciation... :)

A beautiful poem with a beautiful flow. A great write.

Thanks Okoye and Niamat Ali Murtazai for your views....

Yeah...it is filled with metaphors...but its good...i like the last verse most....kudos..keep writting. You might like my poem...A picture and surreal....do leave a comment/criticism...thanks for sharing

the poem is full of metaphysical ideas and treatment of the subject.