Thursday, February 1, 2018

Voice Of Silence Comments

Rating: 5.0

Listen to the voice of silence
At  night when the whole world is asleep
Where there is nothing to distract you
You will realise  that
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Rini Shibu
COMMENTS
Robert Murray Smith 05 July 2018

Rini, this is a beautifully written poem. The voice of silence seemed to be a contradiction in terms You have given it a voice. Into my favourites.++10

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Nudershada Cabanes 04 February 2018

A very imaginative write Rini. Excellently penned. It flows loved it.10+++: -)

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Rini Shibu 04 February 2018

Thanks Nuder..! !

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Bharati Nayak 02 February 2018

Wow- - wonderful penning.Nature plays beautiful music and you can listen to it in silence. The wind swirls and twirls And reach out to you to whisper a new song Raindrops and clouds play orchestra on a melancholic rainy night Leaves talk to the swaying trees

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Rini Shibu 02 February 2018

Thank a lot Bharatiji for visiting my poem! !

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 February 2018

THREE: A magisterial poem, a special piece of art all those references of sounds and that flawlessly goes from one to the other, all intertwined in this poem. I have great admiration for the poetess. I enjoyed this magnificent poem intensely. A 10 and much much more for the Voting.

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Rini Shibu 02 February 2018

Thank you so much sylvia for this wonderful review

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 February 2018

TWO: it ends with a sound that we no longer hear, because we are already sleeping, but even that has a sound. Very nice knitted, Rini.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 February 2018

ONE: It is as if you are working on a knitting, you automatically follow each stitch and before you know it the knitting is finished, the circle is round, a hat or a scarf for your niece, but also the poem,

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Lamar Cole 01 February 2018

This is a very wonderful poem. One of the best that I have ever read. Every word is a pleasure to read.

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Rini Shibu 01 February 2018

Thanks Lamar for your kind words! ! !

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Subhas Chnadra Chakra 01 February 2018

Raindrops and clouds play orchestra on a melancholic rainy night Leaves talk to the swaying trees about the chirping of birds Beautiful song of nature, Rini-a very nice ode to living with the present and the self with a sensible heart. 10

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Rini Shibu 01 February 2018

Thank you so much Subhas! ! ! ! ! !

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Muzahidul Reza 01 February 2018

Listen to the voice of silence At night when the whole world is asleep, ....... with well imageries the poem has been started, but problems are that whom we call do not listen, ........... Thank for sharing the poem with us, ++++++++++++++ 10

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Rini Shibu 01 February 2018

Thanks Reza for your comment! ! ! !

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