Listen to the voice of silence
At night when the whole world is asleep
Where there is nothing to distract you
You will realise that
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A very imaginative write Rini. Excellently penned. It flows loved it.10+++: -)
Wow- - wonderful penning.Nature plays beautiful music and you can listen to it in silence. The wind swirls and twirls And reach out to you to whisper a new song Raindrops and clouds play orchestra on a melancholic rainy night Leaves talk to the swaying trees
THREE: A magisterial poem, a special piece of art all those references of sounds and that flawlessly goes from one to the other, all intertwined in this poem. I have great admiration for the poetess. I enjoyed this magnificent poem intensely. A 10 and much much more for the Voting.
TWO: it ends with a sound that we no longer hear, because we are already sleeping, but even that has a sound. Very nice knitted, Rini.
ONE: It is as if you are working on a knitting, you automatically follow each stitch and before you know it the knitting is finished, the circle is round, a hat or a scarf for your niece, but also the poem,
This is a very wonderful poem. One of the best that I have ever read. Every word is a pleasure to read.
Raindrops and clouds play orchestra on a melancholic rainy night Leaves talk to the swaying trees about the chirping of birds Beautiful song of nature, Rini-a very nice ode to living with the present and the self with a sensible heart. 10
Listen to the voice of silence At night when the whole world is asleep, ....... with well imageries the poem has been started, but problems are that whom we call do not listen, ........... Thank for sharing the poem with us, ++++++++++++++ 10
Rini, this is a beautifully written poem. The voice of silence seemed to be a contradiction in terms You have given it a voice. Into my favourites.++10