Friday, July 28, 2017

Voice Of Patience Comments

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While thou flogged me,
I beseech'd ye:
'Pity pity and forgive,
Pardon me and let me peacefully live'.
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Chandini Jaswal
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Jazib Kamalvi 28 July 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Chandini. That is the reaction of conscious. But what is happenning underneath could also be understood. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks

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Chandini Jaswal 12 August 2017

Thank you Sir! Regards

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