Voice Of Mind Comments

Wonderful! I can hear it from here....

Such an excellent piece....thanks...

A mind explosion can be both a good and bad thing. Your poem harnesses energy, more of a thoughtful reawakening,

Excellent poem dear poetess. The rhymes, the flow and the story. Clear message.10++++++

Superb expression. With every poem your thoughts are getting clear.5***

LAST Response: Since I am also a paintress, I oft comment on that: your chosen pictures are chosen perfectly. Bravo!

7) BUT most of the time you are racing upon all new submitted poems and rapidly written responses, many times you have forgotten the verb and the more, but this poem goes to my Favourites and you have got 5 Stars from me

6) I have read your lovely excellent poem time and again, it so very impressive, dear Varsha, IF you allow yourself the time, more of these poems will appear here. Sure!

5) otherwise Burnt-Out will be peeping in all nooks of our mind. Sure, this poem with the most beauteous phrases and end rhymes prevents you from being Burnt-Out. In days of youre we say just Too Much Done In A Very Short Time, since that is my plight

4) You have composed here a very important and precious poem. Important for our nerves that they do not get a nervous-breakdown. Precious for our being, that we can work in a better crystal clear sphere and 100% satisfactory for our health,

3) That's obvious logic since you have your duty every day in a caring sector. It's natural that your deep conscience would tell you one morning after been awake to care more for yourself. This is human intelligence and very logic, Varsha!

Indeed if you work in the caring sector, it is normal that one morning you will awake with the thought in your mind: : I need to care myself more

I just submit my second response, it got a red sign from THE Editor, so instantly GONE! I start now anew, OK?

This one of your most beauteous poems closest to reality and very precious for the attention to our fellow poets like you. We as poets here on PH must read carefully all the words that have come from the Mind, in this case YOUR Mind.

A well thought out poem. So very true. Well conveyed write.

A wonderful poem! Appreciated the your fascinating expression. Top score!