Voice Of Fear Comments
When I'm here under a cloud;
I hear a strange voice aloud
That makes me to wander around
Nothing but a high pitched sound
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And He will lead me to the shore of mirth, .......................each day is a lesson indeed guided by HIM.............. :) well put in poetic words...
This poem echoes fear of not only your heart Vipins everyone's heart including mine! The way you rhyme and rhythm i can see sweet lyricist in you with added word power! When I see a path in my eldritch screech That there's a God, to Him I can beseech With these lines and many more, you have the power to impress anyone! 100/100!
Sometimes life can feel like a puzzle wrapped inside an enigma... But the joy of life is solving the puzzle... Very nice poem...
Another very beutiful poem. The wisdom in the closing verses makes a wonderful end for this poem. Keep it up, Vipins. Very well written.
it's a good n well-composed poem...a consistent imagery is built up throughout...good job...
A really beautiful poem, really like this my friend. A fantastic write.
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From the maze of life, God can lead us to the shore of mirth....! .. A great poem...... resonant and alliterative....Vipins... you are really talented! !