Voice In The Wilderness Comments

An interesting narrative piece that leaves the reader with an enigma to ponder. A nice creation Lucy.

This is an incredible poem! I love the the entire imagery! Awesome!

Funny. Touching. Beautifully written. Lucy, Congratulations on Poem Of The Day!

Lucy, congratulations on your poem of the day.. James McLain

Above her nodding head! ! Thanks for sharing.

a wonderful story poem about a misunderstanding by a loved one? .......................well written Lucy

Luch, such a great poem of the day... big congrats and a huge 10+++++

Lucy. This is such a good poem displaying your ability to describe a situation, a humorous misunderstanding that tells us so much about who you are and where you live. Brilliant. Deserving of poem of the day...Cheers Geoffrey.

'I said I am a VOICE IN THE WILDERNESS'.................. Every sub-conscious mind receives a voice in the wilderness, which is nothing but the God's commandments from one's own heart. God lives in every heart, who speaks the truth always, but the man doen't act according to the dictates of his conscience, his life ending in disappointment and failure on such occasions.

Oh Lucy, what a lovely ending to this one, I am slightly hard of hearing due to my thyroid packing up, and I know exactly how one can miss hear! ! ! Like grapes for plates! Bless your Gran, she's obviously got a good imagination. Sincerely Ernestine