Saturday, February 23, 2013

Voice Comments

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I am frightened of my own small voice
('But you have to use me, there's no choice')

I am anxious, every sound I make
(' Worried that you'll make a mistake? ')
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Stevie Taite
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Dee Corpolongo 28 February 2013

Excellent and such a fun poem! ! ! and...did I mention....sooo true! I love how you played this, with your inner voice! Very original and made me truly smile! Thanks~

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Nader Baheri 25 February 2013

brilliant idea.the contradiction you concluded at the end is so great.~nb

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Kelvin Owusu 25 February 2013

a nice conversation a wise voice you speak to

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Owain Glyn 23 February 2013

You really must stop talking to yourself, people will think you're strange!

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Chandra Thiagarajan 23 February 2013

A fabulous poem of the VOICE.Enjoyed it.

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Joshua Fegley 23 February 2013

Interesting. I like it.

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Lyn Paul 23 February 2013

So clever Stevie, your talents are amazing. i think you should go on the talent show the Voice and do a reading. Maybe that will help or scare the pants off you!

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 23 February 2013

A very nice poem o hesitation and confidence.

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Stevie Taite

Stevie Taite

Kent, England
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