Wednesday, October 29, 2008

Voice Comments

Rating: 5.0

This voice cries out
From within
Pleading for
A special place
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Ivan Ng1
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Your Poems are simply excellent, you have a marvalous facility of brevity. I read them all but this one I like the most.....10 We have at least one thing in common, we both like the word of Maya Angelou. I am a new poet and would be honored if you would read my single post to date 'I Choose the Mountain'

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iop fga 02 November 2008

I noticed here and in the last poem that I read of yours, there is someone in the end who comes for you, who is there for you. They are both very emotional, yet, very well done.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 02 November 2008

The voice within voice.......A bit philosophical touch and personification of voice as well. Good work Ivan! What is this voice?

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