Vodka Comments

Reread. It brings to mind Russian drinking songs.

A poem that the Russians would drink to. Me too.+++10

phew hot! this one is hot to the touch

The feeling which i get! ! Thanks for sharing.

an interesting write... sensuous, intimate with nice similes.... i liked the way the poem progressed kool!

As a touch person I found your poem quite intoxicating! And well done with your comment re The Crow. Quite right. And based on this poem you are ten times the writer he is.

A good recognition mind and love. Thanks

This is a wonderful and enjoyable love poem. Every line is a treasure.

Hi Rini, A beautiful expression of love. Of course, love has quite an inebriating effect on you, hence the word: : deewaana: : in Hindi. But the metaphors of ice cube in vodka is unique for its clarity and effects. The phrase chilling love, enhances the beauty of this metaphor... And the concluding lines Crazy to sip again : : : the addictive effect of love... Slowly in every sips Like the touch of your lips Your love is intoxicating Spreading all over me To dissolve you and me: : : : are very pleasantly exhilarating.. Lovedly lines.. A 100+++