Saturday, November 3, 2018

Vlad The Bad Comments

Rating: 5.0

Vlad the Bad
Was the first man she ever had
She tried to tame him,
But he was a real cad.
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Chinedu Dike 03 November 2018

An interesting narrative piece embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful poem written with a tinge of humour. Great work! Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Practicing Poetess 04 November 2018

Thank you, Chinedu! Thanks for reading!

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Lamar Cole 03 November 2018

Great poem with a great ending.

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Practicing Poetess 03 November 2018

Lamar, thank you so much for reading. I swear, I think I have been reading too many of your poems over time! This sounds strangely similar to a Lamar poem! I suppose all us poets can learn from each other!

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 November 2018

She tried to tame him! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Practicing Poetess 03 November 2018

Thank you, Edward Kofi Louis. I guess that ol' Vladimir just wasn't tameable! : -)

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Aqua Flower 03 November 2018

What a great poem and tale.... you really are quite talented my dear and I enjoyed your poetry immensely. Sometimes good comes from bad. I sure hope so.

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Practicing Poetess 03 November 2018

So do I, Aqua! So do I. Everyone wants a happy ending. Thank you for appreciating my poetry! :)

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Kostas Lagos 03 November 2018

Heh heh! Good one!

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Practicing Poetess 03 November 2018

Thanks so much, Kostas! I read so much of Lamar Cole's poetry, that I think his influence must have rubbed off on me. This strongly resembles something he would write! By the way, Vladimir is a purely imaginary character.

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