Wednesday, September 2, 2020

Vivid Perception Dies Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Force that flows through sun, sea, wind and snow
Can only be seen by innocent eyes.
Experience seems to highlight our woes,
As each day pure imagination dies.
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Shaun Cronick 12 September 2020

Darned good poems deserve a darned good reread. A full score as well to do any fine poem true poetic justice.

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Shaun Cronick 02 September 2020

Dominic another superb poem with a well written and delivered rhyme scheme and flow. And how well you phrase it 'Familiar routines distract our minds' too true my friend. A full score and richly deserved and some readers and poets see with better eyes.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 September 2020

A well written piece. Truly marvelous.......10++

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