Saturday, October 13, 2018

Vivid Morning Comments

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Cold breeze greets morning
After a sip of nectar,
World sees the beauty
awaken from slumber
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M. Asim Nehal
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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 October 2018

Amusing expression. I cite few lines.... Golden rays falling on the seashell And piercing through the heart And the unconscious mind is restless Near the waterfall... Thanks for sharing.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 14 October 2018

Thank you for this lovely 'Morning' poem, Asim Nehal ji The cool breeze and the golden rays of the sun brings a new hope of a fresh day ahead. Beautiful poem......10

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Aqua Flower 13 October 2018

A beautiful depiction of morning.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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