Friday, April 27, 2018

Vivid Exit Comments

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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Richard Wlodarski 28 April 2018

I have always loved sunsets, Bernard. And now this form of poetry makes me love them that much more. I'll read a few more, then give it the old college try.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 April 2018

Dear Richard, like you, I’m a nature lover..... Nature warms my soul and inspires my heart... Thank you so much for paying attention to my new form of poetryπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ™πŸ™πŸ™

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Susan Williams 27 April 2018

Oh, this is lovely, sir! ! ! I have not done this form of poetry- it looks like it would be tricky to do well. You certainly painted a lovely image with it. Congratulations! ! 10+++++

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Bernard F. Asuncion 27 April 2018

Hi Susan... Thank you so much for the kindness of your heart... Modesty aside, I’ve just started to introduce this humble and simple form of poetry... I’ll be happy even if few would try itπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ™πŸ™πŸ™

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Bernard F. Asuncion

Subic, Philippines
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