Vivid Comments

I really like this poem. The interplay between the other person and you the speaker is remarkable. It is so mercurial. It never settles down. You keep this obviously artistic friend alert, focused, busy. S/he doesn't have a chance to give an excuse, like I'm too tired or Let's call it a day. No way, you are determined to provoke your friend's creative work before the day is done. But it's done in the spirit of fun. This is the best way to make a creative environment for people., so they feel challenged and not intimidated.