Tuesday, September 4, 2012

Vitamin B Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh vitamin B, how I've missed you,
My body has long been bereft
Of your strange but miraculous power
To keep a man healthy and blessed.
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John Carter Brown
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Bri Edwards 06 November 2012

it was on the second or third reading (actually when i was about to send this poem as an e-card and dropp was underlined in red) that i noticed a misspelling. good grief. now i can only give it a 99 out of a 100. bri edwards

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Stevie Taite 06 September 2012

Actually eggs, beans, pork and greens (I love google) And I forgot just how many B vitamins there are!

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Valerie Dohren 05 September 2012

A fabulous write, so amusing and clever - just great John.

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Heather Wilson 04 September 2012

A fantastic poem, pleased you got your health sorted, You made it sound fun, but I`m sure it`s not.

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