Monday, March 4, 2019

Vital Essence Comments

Rating: 3.3

A rainbow can't stop
It's colors showing
A forest cannot be
With out, its trees
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Sandra Feldman
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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 March 2019

This is very moving, dear Sandra My eyes get moist while reading. An immensely sensitive poem, expressed from the heart. This is a classic and immortal poem in one touch, dear Sandra. I never exaggerate, I am talking in all honesty. I love your spontaneity very much. That is the crown upon you poetry. Keep blessed.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 March 2019

A tiny mistake: In the last line must be upon YOUR poetry. Thank you. Addition: A 10++++++++++++ for the votings/ ratings

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Ratnakar Mandlik 04 March 2019

The intensity of longing is simply touching. Thanks for sharing.

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