Looking beyond on a pinnacle,
there appeared an outline, something,
transfigured into structure of concrete posts,
seeing through framed glass windows, massive doors,
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WOW! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! THIS IS A STUNNING POETIC COMPOSITION...I LOVED YOUR ENDING LINE.........VISUALIZE IS THE MAGIC WORD, IN EVERY ARTISTIC CREATION WE VISUALIZED THE IMAGE, OUR SELF, OUR CREATION TO MAKE MORE INTO LIFE.............10
Expresses finery of psyche…though longish… Finish is touchy… Ms. Nivedita UK