Saturday, October 15, 2011

Visual Journey Comments

Rating: 5.0

Seeking space and time, thoughts to awaken my mind
Time to walk in my wake, insight for the journey
Fate to spark, reveal what lies beneath the bark
Distracted by the roots of a tree
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Louis Cecile
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Elaine Sept 16 March 2015

I really enjoyed this poem. Reanimation is brilliant! You took me on your journey!

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Ramesh Rai 15 October 2013

loved the line, 'time to walk in wake'

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Rekha Mandagere 23 May 2012

Beautiful journey. It is really refreshing the minds of the readers. Great desription and lovely imagination :)

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Romeo Della Valle 23 October 2011

Amazing! Beautiful write with great imagery and fine texture embedded on it! I really love it! 10+++ I can clearly identify with this thought provoking writhe for I felt like that when I wrote the recent posted poem titled: A Dare Mind Escape, which I hope you can read and enjoy whenever time permits! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Vipins Puthooran 18 October 2011

Beautiful lines and I like the imageries.. Woven nicely...

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Dave Walker 15 October 2011

Really love this. Love the line, time to walk in my wake. Really fantastic write.

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Louis Cecile

Louis Cecile

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