Saturday, March 18, 2017

Visiting The White House With Grand Children Comments

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The moon shone beautifully under clear sky
Because it was almost a full moon night
We traveled to visit our grandchildren
Who lived in a far away state.
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NHIEN NGUYEN MD
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Dung Nguyen 18 March 2017

Your poem is so comforting, and beautiful! Each words chosen with precision, delivered with devotion. Very touching poem about life. Good work.

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Kimkhue Nguyen 18 March 2017

Thank you for writing this thoughtful poem. Family is always the best in life. Your beautiful grandchildren will be very proud of you! A very nice and unique poem of its own. Thanks for sharing your poem. Best wishes.

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Kim Nguyen 18 March 2017

Beautiful poem. I enjoy very much. Glad that you have good time with family. Thank you for sharing your poem. Each year, they grew taller and wiser Three older girls, and their youngest brother They looked beautiful, and adorable Their frequent smiles, shone on their happy faces.....Very touching poem!

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