Visit To The Seaside Comments

Your PH name is easY to remember, as I may be able to recall 'Ton of Sand'. Y, oh Y would I do THAT! ? Let me read another from you.

My wife and I visited Scotland [ I was 'Screaming and Kicking', (the title of my latest poem here) . ] We boated to an island where Mary Queen of Scots lived for her protection in her teens.

Half past nine - your poem is sure fine. Let me see another.....PLEASE! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Welcome to PH, 'new poet'. bri (edwards) p.s. I have been to Scotland but have no photos to prove it.

TRY to control your ENTHUSIASM Mr. Sandy! ! All too soon you shall be 'over the hill' (old or at least worn out) and ready for a rocking chair; mine does not rock.

Now to read your poem.... btw, Belle is not a bad one to comment on your poem. She and I both enjoy humor, which you mentioned also in your bio here. : )

(cont.) .....I KNOW from personal experience that NOT all people fly, take a bus or a train, or walk 100s of miles to take a picture showing themselves in front of a tourist attraction. : )

I like the Poet's Notes and your bio, BUT [[ from your bio: (cont.) '(I can't abide these people who fly hundreds of miles to see something, then stand in fronton it, obscuring what is there just to prove that they have been there) ' (cont.)

Half past nine, your rhymes were just fine. Half past ten, start all over again. Fun!