Sunday, October 8, 2017

Visions Of Fame And Fortune Comments

Rating: 5.0

V-isions of fame and fortune
A-re deep inside your mind;
N-ever let them fade,
N-or let them stay behind.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 February 2024

In the year of 2017 I could not write down my responses yet (on the new Poem Hunter then) so this is the first response for this ardent Acrostic. Thank you for your understanding

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 February 2024

TOP Marks, that means FIVE STARS for this ardent Acrostic. God's Blessings.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 February 2024

Gorgeous Acrostic and most deserving Member Poem Of The Day on 14th Oct 2017, Pastor Bernard. This Acrostic deserves that, once again my well meant CONGRATULATIONS!

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 May 2020

I-t's time to fight poverty and bring it to oblivion; L-et your eyes view the visions of fame and fortune. wriitng about a great theme. to achieve greatness. t ony

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ROBERT M SMITH 13 May 2020

A well worked poem, Bernard.

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Anjandev Roy 26 February 2020

Excellent write. Thank u. anjandev roy.

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Michael Walker 28 October 2019

I have had visions of fame and fortune and I have bought a good car. To buy a house is more difficult in my country, but I keep hoping. Many of us had to 'fight poverty' and leave it behind, if we could. A penetrating, psychological poem.

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Dominic Windram 03 August 2019

Great poem...thanks so much for sharing!

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Jane Campion 12 July 2019

A lovely positive write.

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Jennifer Birchall 23 May 2019

A great poem of dreaming big, and reap the rewards of working hard. Wonderful dear Bernard.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 May 2019

V-isions of fame and fortune A-re deep inside your mind; ...impressive beginning. A beautiful poem in acrostic form has been astutely delineated. Thanks for sharing.

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Savita Tyagi 07 May 2019

Lovely acrostic with a great message. Dream and work towards wealth and put it to good use.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 March 2019

A brilliant poem my friend! My great pleasure reading it repeatedly!

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Philo Yan 19 March 2019

Good composition and well thought out.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 March 2019

Thanks, Ma'am Philo for your wonderful comment.......

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Cheryl Tutaan 04 January 2019

B-uying house and cars R-emains in your sight; Remarkable acrostic lines, dear Bernard................

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 March 2019

Thanks, dear Cheryl for your fantastic words of support......

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Cheryl Tutaan 03 January 2019

B-uying house and cars R-emains in your sight; A-im at the glorious life, Z-one of gold is bright. I-t's time to fight poverty and bring it to oblivion; L-et your eyes view the visions of fame and fortune. Magnificent acrostic, dear Bernie............................

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Cheryl Tutaan 01 January 2019

V-isions of fame and fortune A-re deep inside your mind; N-ever let them fade, N-or let them stay behind. I-n the visions of fame and fortune, dreams are clearly seen; E-arly eighth of October, your goal is a perfect scene. Exceptional acrostic, dear Bernard......................

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Cheryl Tutaan 31 December 2018

This is truly one of your gems, Bernard❤️❤️❤️ Keep it up😍😍😍

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Cheryl Tutaan 31 December 2018

This is truly one of your gems, Bernard❤️❤️❤️ Keep it up😍😍😍

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Cheryl Tutaan 31 December 2018

This is quite lovely, Bernard❤️❤️❤️ I’m profuse in my thanks.....

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