Govind, not bad. Got a few questions: looney, not looney bin, a person can't be a bin. Also did you intend a double-meaning for date? In American English, date can mean taking someone out for dinner or a movie, courting. I rather enjoy that idea.
If you'd like, check out my new website:
jeffersoncarterverse.com
Let me know how you like it. Yrs, JC
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Govind, not bad. Got a few questions: looney, not looney bin, a person can't be a bin. Also did you intend a double-meaning for date? In American English, date can mean taking someone out for dinner or a movie, courting. I rather enjoy that idea. If you'd like, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Let me know how you like it. Yrs, JC