Vision With Sight Comments

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Ashraful Musaddeq. Let all flowers mushroom in pond They have enough of space and room Shakespeare and Rudyard may not appear within night Let us not loose true vision with true sight - - a lovely poem with beautiful ending Sunday at 11: 27pm · Unlike · 1

Jen Walls Excellent heart and soul singing onto transformation, focus, and caring. Loved it very much! Sunday at 11: 44pm · Unlike · 1

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Pami Jane Tennant likes this. Pami Jane Tennant In a tremendously moving work such as this, I cannot bring myself to offer up any type of critique, only say this one thing which is what I have said before on forcing rhyme...sometimes if you can't find the word to smoothly rhyme, perhaps assonance or no rhyme is best. Having said that, which comes from my own training in learning and teaching poetry, your poem is very noble and deeply stirring. Loss of life in situations of wartime are always deeply disturbing, especially in light of how capricious the leaders are of the lives given to serve. It is my own firm belief that the leaders of various governments should be forced to fight their own battles instead of hiding behind the blood of the innocent...oh but wait...that would mean...GASP...and end to war! ! ! ! God bless you for the honesty you always write with! ! ! 49 minutes ago · Edited · Like · 1

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Queeny Gona Dear Hasmukh Ji, you have portraid it right regarding the mission with vision will always result in success. It is not always that easy to frame yardsticks for mastery in poetry but then the most admired one is the most reputed in the field! 50 minutes ago via mobile · Unlike · 1

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