Vision Of An Old Man Comments

written quite nice! show the wisdom n the fate that time sets on us. as we get older we become more wiser n more respect for our lives. we seen what those who are youung have not. Great poem: D ~Bella

Well written and thoughtful message. Keep up the good work.

you hit the nail on the head.... respect.... would solve a lot of the world's problems!

I agree with your notes Ellias, and this is a good poem.

It's an undeniable fact and we're going all the way...respect is necessary as you mentioned...nice writting, i loved it.

Wonderful lines...Indeed we should respect the old and never forget that we will also reach that age one day.

Really nice to read you opinion on the vision of an old man I agree with all you have mentioned here I like this one! !

This is true and could be your new poem is the best....i so loved it_Unwritten Soul