Vision In Progress Comments

Congratulations on POD. Enjoyed the sublime poetry, with nice rhyme and rhythm.

I enjoyed the rhyming but did NOT mind that it did NOT rhyme throughout.

(cont.) But this poem is entertaining and not harmful (I think) , so....it's a 'step in the right direction'. 5 stars. ;) bri

stanza 7: MANIFEST, as a transitive verb, has this definition: 'to make evident or certain by showing or displaying' I think this is creative poetry and most likely 'wishful thinking', with little chance ok having 'peace and love' prevail. : (

A world of wonder and beauty, Where love and peace prevail. A place where kindness is currency, And hate and anger fade.... Love these lines. A beautiful poem is well executed. Five stars.