Monday, May 11, 2009

Vision Embroidery Comments

Rating: 4.7

(dedicated to Karin Anderson, a great poet at poemhunter)

क ् ल ै ब ् य ं म ा स ् म ग म
प ा र ् थ न ै त त ् त ् व य ् य ु प प द ् य त े
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Seema Chowdhury 06 May 2010

beautiful poem. a nice dedication too.

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Cheung Shun Sang 21 May 2009

Lights will represnt time. Visions weaves are slow in humnan media. Baby no more gods

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Eyan Desir 20 May 2009

Very nice................

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Omar Ibrahim 15 May 2009

wow! ! i liked your words.but i couldn't read the other language.

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Vidi Writes 14 May 2009

Its sadi that - “The happiness of life is made up of a smile, a kind look, a heart-felt compliment, and the countless infinitesimals of pleasurable and genial feeling” The same got reflected here. Good read. Thank you.

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James B. Earley 13 May 2009

An endearing tribute of soulful appreciation to the spiritual dynamo, Karin Anderson. Ahmad's message speaks volumes for many of us, so fortunate to have known her voice!

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Bonnie Collins 13 May 2009

A great poem, to a great poet Karin Anderson... Very nicely done with so much tenderness..... Very good......

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Mimi Fakhira 12 May 2009

Mr. Ahmad, as always your work is beautiful. A delicate piece of art. Love the title and the poem...10++++

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Alf Hutchison 12 May 2009

Ahmad... and the maker of everything who is Himself Light. God. A fine write.... Alf

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Anthony Foster 12 May 2009

The words are very precious in the beauty of the road to enlightenment. A joy to read.

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Ravi A 12 May 2009

it is the blood of brotherhood it is the rope of sisterhood embrace the precious it is the tenderness it is the love inside like a universe vision of light like a divine embroidery through the river of life in purest and noblest nature song ascends.... Well said. I also have very noble thoughts about her. Poemhunter has given us a chance to exchange our hearts with her. Let us be thankful to the website. May she live for long.

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Rajkumar Mukherjee 12 May 2009

Dear Siddiqui, This is a devotional poem based on The Geeta where Krishna is inspiring Arjuna to fight his kith and kins in the devine war.Your devotion to Karin Anderson is exemplary and interwoven like an embroidary with selected words embeded in imageries so colourful that the receipient must be a lucky one and of course, deserving.Particularly, these lines are worth mentioning to show the devotion: 'you are the inspiration you are the rainbow you are the moon you are the sun you are the air' OR 'let me carry you in my heart let me carry you in my mind let me carry you in my soul let me carry you in my love may be the closest to me' While the first paragraph suggest the devotion, the second one suggest for ultimate submission. Your paraphrasing and rhythm made the poem more attractive.Thanks for sharing As a poem A-10-FROM ME Rajkumar

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Luwi Habte 12 May 2009

dear poet this is so sweet nice poem i like it preety beautiful and thanks for sharing

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Subroto Chatterjee 12 May 2009

A wonderful dedication to a lovely poetess! ! Cheers. Subroto

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Sonya Florentino 12 May 2009

an inspirational poem dedicated to a wonderful poet!

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Eyan Desir 12 May 2009

Very good Dear poet

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Chitra - 12 May 2009

A finely embroidered vision of the whole world without any barriers or frontiers

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Mohammed Albalushi 12 May 2009

you are the inspiration you are the rainbow you are the moon you are the sun you are the air you are the wonderful poet

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Maria Barbara Korynt 12 May 2009

Beautiful personal poem interwoven with great emotion. Very much I like him. (10 v) Greetings. Maria Barbara Korynt

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What can I say Ahmad...I, a humble poet in front of a computer screen, could never have imagined such a beautiful tribute. Would you believe, the first poetry book my writing group published was called Threads because we embroidered words. It captured experiences such as warmth and passion, beauty and harshness of the seasons, the cycle of birth and death, the pain of injustice and some little joy that could override despair. We, at Poem Hunter share this common thread and you have embroidered by heart today with rich multicolored imagery. God bless you, Ahmad, for your kindness and thoughtful gesture! love.... Karin Anderson

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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