Friday, February 13, 2009

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((sung in melody of bob dylan's 'gates of eden', key of Bb))

phantasmal morning drops of rain salute the morning streets
as daisy blossoms lilt and bend where forest dwellers meet
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luke holt
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Patrick McFarland 14 February 2009

Terrific poem Luke. I love the lines 'the lowly, humble poet contemplates his last mistake he let the wild roses die before he'd one to take'. There's definitely a beat influence going on here. Kerouac would be proud.

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