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A GREAT PIECE OF PROSE! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Very interesting selection of words!

nice selection of words......quite different and interesting....thanks for sharing....sebastine...

very unique piece from a unique you....brilliantly done and successfully put me to read and absorb your words...and savor the meaning of your piece as a whole...its wonderful....it seems I'm in the most beautiful place where everything is there....just like music...everything is there...all the feelings.....10+++++ more power....maia

Very nice work, I enjoyed this format and your selection of vocabulary. i like the form you have wrote in making it different and unique :) rgrds maryam

All these..has to be visible, indeed... Wonderful poem of deep thought... Thanks for sharing..A 10++!

you've found different nouns in writing your poem, amazing.. really great work

You have enumerated different arts of nature... Hmm...a different one! ! !

Very Awesome and well expressed. Thanks for sharing -Brie

A novel way of presentation Ahmad - and it certainly catches the eye as would the bouncing notes of the music - it is a quite unique innovation to write after the musical experience and you cleverly represent what you feel in this and your other work - - a top mark from me...... Fay.

visibly well expressed!

Superb crafting is visibly great!

I think all those being you mentioned are delirious by the pianist performance, he should be wonderful player. Wonderful piece.

It's a simple, yet contains a beautiful meanings.. Well penned...

Don't bend-fold-spindle-mutilate

You painted the poem with stroke of colorful words. Good Work......................

is it about a musical score or a painting?

Nice writing and epressive words used.

quite interesting, well done!

Love the pattern its nice and nice wording... Krista