Thursday, September 9, 2021

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Rating: 5.0

From pregnancy to parturition
keeps in her womb,
gives food from her blood,
receives wastes of foetus
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Nabakishore Dash
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Richard Wlodarski 31 May 2022

Dr. Dash, sincerest thanks for inviting me to read this exquisite poem. It truly encompasses every thing that makes a mother. Your title so perfectly describes God's primary caregiver. A poem that was a joy to behold. Should be POD!

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Anjandev Roy 20 September 2021

Outstanding write throughout.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 September 2021

A poem about starting at the being of Birth, then the poem develops The baby is nurtured, it enters maturity and then cares for all the siblings sick or not WOW! This poem deserves 5 Stars full. Excellent poem with brilliant content Poet's Notes said it all.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 September 2021

What a wonderful poem. Encompassing write on the unconditional love and sacrifices of a mother. Brilliantly narrated. To my Poem List.

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