Visible anxiety
Thursday,3rd January 2019
Whether you had told me or not
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***We congratulate First Reflection (पहला प्रतिबिंब) (પ્રથમ પ્રતિબિંબ) Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Ji for his notable achievement and becoming the member poet of the day today and we are glad to read his valuable member Poem of the Day titled, 'Visible Anxiety, ' which is an outstanding poem. ***
Your effort of expressing social observation is highly appreciated. A perfect poem is selected as the Poem of the Day in member section.
CONGRATULATIONS! A great poem of social perception is excellently penned. You have recognized from a simple word inside the crowd and you have understood many questions. You saw her in one perception and you noticed anger in her face. Vehicle was removed at right time. An excellent sharing is done really. I shall give full 100/100 marks for this notable work.
I could have got you from the crowd! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A chance meeting turned resulted in an interesting poem. Congratulations!
'with the same temper and emotion she recognized me in party I too stared with no visible anxiety'..is really interesting. Enjoyed the way you penned the the chance meeting. Congrats.
Remarkable versification of a brush meeting. Congrats on poem of the Day.
Congratulation dear poet for the poem of the day...very worthy poem..
A poem of a brief encounter that was to last? ....well written Hasmukhlal
many days later, I saw her in one reception with the same temper and emotion she recognized me in party I too stared with no visible anxiety.Making occasions permanent writing about it. and making the reader to think. thank u dear Hasmukhlal
Lovely poem of the day, Hasmukh. Congrats for being chosen............................
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I know that I'm a much better poet than you. Do not dare to insult me again.