Virus era
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Once upon a time
in a remote province
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The age of Virus Thought provoking poem High craftsmanship
10 + for the incredible imagination at work in this frightening poem
I have never pictured a virus until I read this and I kid you not, imagining them gives me the creeps! ! ! There are some viruses that are more inconvenient than anything else- -but the killers live to kill as if they were made by demons to torture mankind... the world needs to come together to defeat the current monster virus
sometimes dances like a nasty worm then becomes a human holding a dagger attacks the keyboard and the pen.... even the whole of existence while at other times they jump off the skin burrow beneath it no one will be left sleeping calmly- - these lines brought them alive skin-crawlingly alive - shiver
Dear professional poet and critic Valsa George; I would appreciate your special way for reading my humble work, I hope you have enjoyed it, many thanks for your valuable comment which is enriching the text in many ways, Kind regards
Unfortunately we are in the strangling grip of a deadly virus that thrives on a foreign body. it has subdued not one bunch of people or a country but the entire mankind and the whole world! It has brought life to a standstill and man lives in perpetual fear! I liked the way you have delineated its evolution and the high station it enjoys now. Well crafted! A 10
Hello and thanks Dear Poet Rose; Definitely your fantastic reading is enriching the background of readers to discover the hidden side of this poem, Many Thanks and kind regards
Liked how the brilliant Poet described the virus. A very unique thought on how they conquer humanity. " Viruses wish to stay high to shine brightly instead of the stars." So poignant yet so true. Lines that could only be executed by a deep discerning mind. Onto my Poem List
Excellent write. Very perceptive and brilliant presentation on the viruses that delivered humanity to darkness. The poem expresses and vividly depicted how a minute creature can equalize humanity through fear and death.
Oh Dear Robert M Smith, the viral paradise is a unique description for our modern life, well done and thanks, stay well and keep writing
Dear Tom Allport many thanks for your comment, exactly that is out problem you have mentioned.. all the best
We (mankind) find it hard to live in harmony with natures invisible army? ......well penned.
The virus is still leading humanity to darkness and nothingness. A beautiful poem brilliantly woven depicting a very small creature that can terminate mankind.