Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, December 24, 2009

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Rating: 4.7

Her words almost killed me
First time she used the word “you” instead of we
So much hatred and no love words
I almost sank praying the lords
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Darshna Chopra 06 September 2010

So much hatred and no love words I almost sank praying the lords

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Louis Rams 29 December 2009

love is a virus and it attacks your soul, which can leave you empty or leave you whole.

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Kassiah Gervaise 26 December 2009

it's a very sweet poem...and forgive my honesty it was a bit boring when i read you're words i don't believe them i see it as just a story i don't really know if this has happen to you of not but what i do know is is that you need to write about things you understand and don't force things to rhyme a poem is anything that you make it to be...anyway thats all i will say here thank you and have a good day.

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 24 December 2009

Don't know what took me so long to check out this one..? It really deserves more than the words i'll say. :)

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Nizamettin Esen Haymanali 24 December 2009

Meaningful, didactic poem well penned.10.

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Nizamettin Esen Haymanali 24 December 2009

Meaningful, didactic poem, well penned.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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