Her words almost killed me
First time she used the word “you” instead of we
So much hatred and no love words
I almost sank praying the lords
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love is a virus and it attacks your soul, which can leave you empty or leave you whole.
it's a very sweet poem...and forgive my honesty it was a bit boring when i read you're words i don't believe them i see it as just a story i don't really know if this has happen to you of not but what i do know is is that you need to write about things you understand and don't force things to rhyme a poem is anything that you make it to be...anyway thats all i will say here thank you and have a good day.
Don't know what took me so long to check out this one..? It really deserves more than the words i'll say. :)
So much hatred and no love words I almost sank praying the lords