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A cloned twin who was accepted faster than he was made
Eyes and Hair as white as wool
But skin as Brown as wood
But Darker
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Zahir Kijani
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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 05 September 2009

An imaginative piece. The subject matter of the poem is more scientific and some more poetic touch may have to be there. Best wishes.

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Ramesh T A 11 May 2009

Future problems of cloning of human beings are difficult to envisage now itself! Brave New World by Aldous Huxley gives a clear picture and your subsequent creative poems may try on that line to visualize the developments in that stages. Thought provoking!

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