Tuesday, June 27, 2023

Virtues Of Rain And Woman. Comments

Rating: 5.0

As the rain gently falls, a woman's spirit resounds,
both are heaven-sent gifts, with virtues that astound,
women and rain possess countless graces,
both leave us amazed, and our hearts in their embraces.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Nabakishore Dash 30 June 2023

Great role in bringing peace, solace, and happiness in society.I am happy u are not a misogynist atleast.My regards and gratitudes to u Dr Nehal for your nice thoughts.

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Nabakishore Dash 30 June 2023

Visited second time your nice poem. I don't know why oppression on ladies causes agitation in me from my childhood days.They have great role in bein

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

LINE-THE-LAST: Did you a REALLY WANT TO SAY: 'spending too much time with a lady can cause agitation. AS WELL as INSEMINATION, FERTILIZATION, GESTATION, & all of 'the rest'? ? ? ? : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

Overall, I give ***** (five) stars. ;) bri

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

.....? I didn't know. I guess I've played that role before. I don't know what 'loving fate' means. Hmm? The last stanza stands out as a wise warning about the pros & cons of 'the fairer ' and 'rain'. Beware! ! : )

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

where DID my unfinished comment GO? ? ? (CONT.) stanza 3: Did 'you' know that 'persona' is sometimes: 'Persona A dramatic character, distinguished from the poet, who is the speaker of a poem.Z

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

stanza 3: Did 'you' know that 'persona' is sometimes: 'Persona A dramatic character, distinguished from the poet, who is the speaker of a poem.

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

I SHOULD READ MORE; I SHALL. ;) The poem's first word: As. Does 'as' here mean 'like/similarly' OR 'while'? ? It DOES make a difference. WHAT do you mean in your poems with 'soul'? ? ? ?

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

line 1: resound(s) : 'resound rĭ-zound′ intransitive verb To make a loud, prolonged, or reverberating sound: synonym: echo. To be filled with sound; reverberate. To be talked about, celebrated, or extolled.'

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Nabakishore Dash 30 June 2023

Superb comparative account dear Nehal.Men can not stand without woman is the truth of our life.excess of any thing has a bad repercussion but some exceptions are there. Amusing poem along with the satires imbued.

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Juhaina Tumlu 29 June 2023

No man can write better than this, I liked it very much.

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

I did not like what I've read of it so far, just lines 1 & 2. Do you think any WOMAN can write better than this? ? Send me one of yours if you wish.

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Zumas Millamo 28 June 2023

Yes True, Both are blessings we must cherish and appreciate, for a happy life, we must establish a loving fate.

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Suzon Albert 27 June 2023

Awesome poem. Rain cleanses the air, healing nature's flora and fauna, women enhance our lives, like a precious persona.

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Anil Kumar Panda 27 June 2023

A nice comparison. Both are expected when not seen for long. Enjoyed. Thanks.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 27 June 2023

bravo! Asim BRAVO! ! ! ! ! TOP MARKS

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Anjandev Roy 27 June 2023

Both are blessings........ perfect.....thank u, my friend.....

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