As the rain gently falls, a woman's spirit resounds,
both are heaven-sent gifts, with virtues that astound,
women and rain possess countless graces,
both leave us amazed, and our hearts in their embraces.
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Visited second time your nice poem. I don't know why oppression on ladies causes agitation in me from my childhood days.They have great role in bein
LINE-THE-LAST: Did you a REALLY WANT TO SAY: 'spending too much time with a lady can cause agitation. AS WELL as INSEMINATION, FERTILIZATION, GESTATION, & all of 'the rest'? ? ? ? : ) bri
.....? I didn't know. I guess I've played that role before. I don't know what 'loving fate' means. Hmm? The last stanza stands out as a wise warning about the pros & cons of 'the fairer ' and 'rain'. Beware! ! : )
where DID my unfinished comment GO? ? ? (CONT.) stanza 3: Did 'you' know that 'persona' is sometimes: 'Persona A dramatic character, distinguished from the poet, who is the speaker of a poem.Z
stanza 3: Did 'you' know that 'persona' is sometimes: 'Persona A dramatic character, distinguished from the poet, who is the speaker of a poem.
I SHOULD READ MORE; I SHALL. ;) The poem's first word: As. Does 'as' here mean 'like/similarly' OR 'while'? ? It DOES make a difference. WHAT do you mean in your poems with 'soul'? ? ? ?
line 1: resound(s) : 'resound rĭ-zound′ intransitive verb To make a loud, prolonged, or reverberating sound: synonym: echo. To be filled with sound; reverberate. To be talked about, celebrated, or extolled.'
Superb comparative account dear Nehal.Men can not stand without woman is the truth of our life.excess of any thing has a bad repercussion but some exceptions are there. Amusing poem along with the satires imbued.
I did not like what I've read of it so far, just lines 1 & 2. Do you think any WOMAN can write better than this? ? Send me one of yours if you wish.
Yes True, Both are blessings we must cherish and appreciate, for a happy life, we must establish a loving fate.
Awesome poem. Rain cleanses the air, healing nature's flora and fauna, women enhance our lives, like a precious persona.
A nice comparison. Both are expected when not seen for long. Enjoyed. Thanks.
Great role in bringing peace, solace, and happiness in society.I am happy u are not a misogynist atleast.My regards and gratitudes to u Dr Nehal for your nice thoughts.