Virtue And Sin Comments

All true, but only to the extent that we all walk seperate paths towards a common goal. What is correct for one on a spiritual path may not suit another.

very true. i agree a 100%. great job.10

very honest thought out indeed! expressed beautifully! 10+++++++ Surprisingly, I have seen, lovers in the name of love/peace ignite hatred/fighting!

Mr. Andalib; I don't think I'm really qualified to comment, but you sent a message so I think it only fair to reply... I like what you're trying to do, here (at least what I think you're trying to do) . I like that it's short. I like the juxtapositioning of themes. But... there's something I'm not finding in it, something that holds it together... It makes me wonder why-why these things, why did you chose them as opposites and complements and why did you chose the verbs you did to tell me about them... I hope to read other of your poems, though, because there is definitely something majestic and sweet, here. Stephanie

Asif, this is beautiful. Succinct brilliant summation of contrasts, what works/what helps and what doesn't to make life worthwhile and humans better people. Yes, a definite reminder of how we must share what is loving, kind and humane with one and all. Animals, too, I hope. Thank you for giving me the opportunity to share your awareness and concern. Have you read poems by Sulaiman Mohd Yosuf, Ahmad Shiddiqi, Seema Chowdhury, Yoonoos Peerbocus and Godspower Oshodin? Lots more to read of course, but those writers are very tuned into life, love, sharing and caring. My best to you and yours, Carol