Thursday, September 11, 2008

Virtual Waves Comments

Rating: 5.0

Walking along the sandy beach,
With waves striding beside me,
In cool morning salty breeze,
Singing Seagulls flying over the sea;
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Vidyadhar Durgekar
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Gargi Saha 23 September 2008

Lovely poem written on the sea....... Love &hugs.

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Mamta Agarwal 17 September 2008

a reflective poem, i think ocean does that.waves not reaching the shore like unfulfilled desires is full of sadness. well composed 10

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Kesav Easwaran 15 September 2008

a write reflective...waves/ desires...good simile there...well done 10

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