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very provoking poem.. I like it..

very powerful and striking...reminds me of a poem i am currently working on, 'Icy Prison'...lc

wonderful poem, gave me goose bumps, I love this

i gave it a 10... good follow

You have a great talent at writing poems. You know what to write and what will bring people in. I enjoyed them all :) Well done!

.....nine days fall completes. Fred, I have tried to visualize in these nine poems the complete downfall of man as consequence of his sin. May be I misinterpreted it, Please don't mind if it disagrees with your stream of thought. One thing is sure, poetry is your realm and metaphysics is your strength. CP

great imagery write...well implied simile...

thats really cool! :) dark but really, really cool

! ! ! reminds me of a vampire novel you should look up the song.. I love the night by Chris DeBurgh paints a good picture in my head as well as your song

! ! ! reminds me of a vampire novel you should look up the song.. I love the night by Chris DeBurgh paints a good picture in my head as well as your song