Wednesday, September 4, 2019

Virtual Reality Comments

Rating: 5.0

I live always in the vitual
For each moment I live
Becomes a past the next moment
I can not go back to the moment passed
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Bharati Nayak
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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 February 2020

This is a beautiful poem! Through this comment I want to know from you.. have you seen me? Do you have knowledge about my education, experiences, family background etc? How could you support when a man of your soil offended/defamed? It's painful

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Bharati Nayak 15 February 2020

Thank you Dilip for reading, commenting and rating mypoems (always 10s) . Regarding my poem 'Virtual Reality', I must say our thoughts and perceptions are virtual. Science/magic can change our perception of a thing.A truth is what we perceive them to be true.Please keep reading and inspire me through your valuable comments.

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Muhammad Ali 11 January 2020

A poem that contains, observation, wisdom, meditation, and dream and peace is destined. Very beautiful poem. Some similar thoughts I share in my poem BUBBLES, though that is less poetic.

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Glen Kappy 30 September 2019

this gets me thinking, bharati, about the nature of present reality—so fleeting. i have found that to experience it fully is a spiritual gift that comes in moments. but such moments resonate, ripple, echo, teach us what clarity is. -glen

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 September 2019

u skipped my comment any reason ma'am

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Bharati Nayak 12 September 2019

Many thanks Poet Poet for always inspiring me..

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 September 2019

U R INTELLECTUALLY PRAGMATIC emotion as it comes gives the sonnet a twist ITS NOT EASY TO COMPOSE SONNETS

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Vaidyanathan Ram Iyer Channel 11 September 2019

The moment we live becomes passed by next moment. Thank you poet.

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Bharati Nayak 11 September 2019

Thank you poet Vaidyanathan Ram Iyer for your valuable feedback.

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 September 2019

A Moment Of My Dream! ! ! ! ! 🤗🥁 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bharati Nayak 08 September 2019

Yes, Edward Kofi Louis.Thank you so much for inspiration.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 September 2019

A well crafted composition, dear Ma’am Bharati...10+++

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Bharati Nayak 08 September 2019

Thank you Bernard F.Asuncion for your kind read and inspiring comment.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 September 2019

Present is very precious in life. Past is past and future is uncertain, so we have to act according to present need. We dream for uncertain future.as it is human nature. You have nicely delineated about time and dream. It may be cited... I can not go back to the moment passed / Nor can I live in my future / The moments I will live / Only in an imagination Beautiful poem.10

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Bharati Nayak 05 September 2019

Thank you Sir, Kumarmani Mahakul for your kind words of appreciation.

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Bill Cantrell 04 September 2019

In the stream of time we are placed, between yesterday and tomorrow there ones such as yourself who savor the moment at hand, blessed are those that make the best of each moment while they have it....a wonderful poem! ! !

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Bharati Nayak 04 September 2019

Thank you so much Bill Cantrell for your inspiring comment.Yes, present is very precious and we should savour the moment at hand.

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