Virtual Lover Comments

You have set out this poem so well explaining the attraction within cyber space. It happens, and it feels so real and one goes through emotional stress. The last lines are brilliant and deliver a clear message to not get involved...Excellent 10 Karin Anderson

You capture the mood in extraordinary fashion, vividly creating the image of mutual angst. Life is indeed strange...my friend.

If there is one thing I especially love in poetry, it is humor, Tracy, and this delightful poem is just packed full of it in every verse! Not only that, it is a very modern, up-to-date poem, as chats like these go on every day, it seems. Of course, often the results of such 'online affairs' cause considerable distress and worse in a relationship or marriage. Your fine choice of phrasing in this marvellous poem made it seem like it was happening right before the readers' eyes and even has us rooting for you two 'cyber lovers' to get back together! You wrote a very appealing and entertaining poem and I am sure I am not the only one who got a great kick out of this wonderful write! Carl.