Virtual Love.......E'Fishing Comments

It's striking, true and with unusual theme. Virtual world is trapping, It's like a jinni serving many Romeos and Juliets(a vityual version of the play should be re-written) . This is greatly enjoyable composition with a lot of digital vocabulary store.

Your use of English is fantastic. I enjoyed reading this, Kurdos to you my friend x

I only get this part: The virtual world a veritable trap Abuzz the genie on my clap We can be Cleopatras and Ceasars online. And try to build this grandeur in real life. The new virtual truth! A pun intended.

Amazing virtual love.. love with 10++

the rhyme through each couplet is interesting as the story about the circle of life is vividly expressed.10