Tuesday, November 4, 2008

Virginity Taker Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have finally found the right one
To have and to hold for all eternity
In sickness and in health
Until death do us part
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Mrs. Cynosure
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Bill Thomas 30 January 2009

Becca, this should be a set text in every school: look how a bloke can damage a beautiful, sensitive woman like you. I weep on behalf of men who think that women are objects to be used... thank you for writing this: your voice deserves to be heard at the highest level. Bless you. Every good wish, Bill

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Sebastine Humaemo 14 December 2008

what a powerful lines Becca.....your honest words makes you divine......one of your best poems again....regards sebastine....

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 12 November 2008

U WRITE WITH A LOT OF HONESTY... KEEP IT UP...

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Drake Kinkaid 10 November 2008

Another good one I liked it as well as the others

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Saint Cynosure 04 November 2008

Beautiful and heart felt, very very good...

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wow great it reminds me of one of my poems please take a look its called TO HAVE AND TO HOLD Very nice poem

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