Broken free, the butterfly spreads upon a flower,
Bountiful colors appearing in her flushed wings,
Rustling with the slight, warmest of breezes,
Too fragile to breathe outwards.
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A beautiful poem and wordings felt more fascinating and liked.
this is a very good poem indeed...i like the poem very much....a vivid image has been created...i have also written a poem on butterfly...you may read it
what a lovely poem, it's like watching or walking in the garden along with butterflies :) my vote is 10v:
delicate and tender... it flutters over the subject like the butterfly that you have painted in graphic colors and i liked you lines difficult to encompass vague and subjective feelings...did a great job...liked