Wednesday, January 18, 2012

Virginity Comments

Rating: 4.0

Broken free, the butterfly spreads upon a flower,
Bountiful colors appearing in her flushed wings,
Rustling with the slight, warmest of breezes,
Too fragile to breathe outwards.
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Sarah Elizabeth Clark
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Saadat Tahir 20 December 2016

delicate and tender... it flutters over the subject like the butterfly that you have painted in graphic colors and i liked you lines difficult to encompass vague and subjective feelings...did a great job...liked

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A beautiful poem and wordings felt more fascinating and liked.

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Wahab Abdul 19 January 2012

this is a very good poem indeed...i like the poem very much....a vivid image has been created...i have also written a poem on butterfly...you may read it

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yellowbell alamanda 18 January 2012

what a lovely poem, it's like watching or walking in the garden along with butterflies :) my vote is 10v:

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