Sunday, October 19, 2008

Virgin Ground Comments

Rating: 2.8

He was the neighbor boy
and I, the city girl
banished to the countryside
to the grandparents,
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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 19 October 2008

I enjoyed this real little poem so rich in narrative style. Maybe the feeling of the author isn't the same of the reader, however one feels a tremendous melancholy in it. Those quoted final words, moreover very fine, seem to want to put the author in another and new fiction.

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Lonnie Hicks

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