Saturday, March 19, 2016

Virgin Goddess Comments

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At the tip
Of this peninsula,
She stands
Rosary in hand,
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Govind Ramakrishnan
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Stephen Park 22 March 2016

Beautiful juxtaposition in this poem. I love the two seas and the ocean equivalence with the past, present and future. This poem is a great example of show rather than tell. I read all your poems and they are special.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 19 March 2016

The significance of the Virgin Goddess and Her superb seat at the tri-junction of oceans at Cape Comorin has been marvelously woven in this beautifully conceived poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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