Wednesday, September 3, 2014

Viral Fever, Not So Cute! Comments

Rating: 4.8

A cute virus
Looked at me lovingly
It look at the prospective victims
To whom it can over power easily.
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Rajnish Manga 04 April 2017

Viral fever will shake you badly and will drain you completely that will give you a 'Peaceful sleep free from any thoughts you can enjoy! Loved reading this poem. Thanks.

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Uma Ram 08 June 2015

Awesome write mam...

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Dinesan Madathil 18 September 2014

Every virus is cute in one way as it`s mostly a protein envelope otherwise. It however weakens us and leaves us trodden upon. Love virus has no remedy. It generates poetry at the end..

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Amitava Sur 10 September 2014

Geetha - through your lovely deliberation you cautioned about these deadly viruses... very good Only one thing I'd like to mention here that a) these virus may kill you being present in you b) but the love virus will kill by deserting you only....... ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Valsa George 08 September 2014

Beware! It is a formidable enemy which can keep us as its victim even for weeks together....! Though may not be deadly, it is so menacing! Oh... never at all cute! Enjoyed this interesting write, Geetha!

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Akhtar Jawad 06 September 2014

The virus and the cockroaches have brought a little change in you and your poems, a lovely element of fun that entertained your readers. Nice write.

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Savita Tyagi 05 September 2014

What a wonderful poem. You can give your hand to one who loves you but not to one who wants to kill you. Life's most practical advise parted through simple encounter with virus. Enjoyed reading it very much. You are very imaginative.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 05 September 2014

love bugs better remain incurable. enjoyed this write Geetha.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 September 2014

It's not love virus which affected you Beware of this virus! .......nice one 10 not to geeta nair when she is her self a flair in he sky and no one dares. why?

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Salini Nair 04 September 2014

fantastic lines..................Definitely not one who love to kill you! It's not love virus which affected you Beware of this virus!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 03 September 2014

Love without pain, ah! no gain if love is truth then there is thorn in it we have to compromise...thank for share Geetha

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 03 September 2014

Wow clever poem! Kudos. So what is that virus? The luv virus?

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Neela Nath Das 03 September 2014

You can write on any topic easily.Versatile poet you are!

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Neela Nath Das 03 September 2014

You can write on any topic easily.Versatile poet you are!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 03 September 2014

Yes viral fever has its merits and demerits though demerits count more than its merits...sickness of small importance should not be neglected be it viral or contained though viral lasts three to seven days as its incubation period.......Geetha......very well composed

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 03 September 2014

A warning to all is delivered beautifully. There is positive side too if one can observe. Peaceful sleep free from any thoughts you can enjoy! Nicely said. But it its dangers are many. One needs to take care. Thank you.

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Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi 03 September 2014

Loved the description of the viral fever...felt sad that you suffered so much. Very interesting piece. Really the doctor in me enjoyed it too. Thanks for sharing

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 03 September 2014

Just like similar poems of the poet this is also beautiful and theme is love in its own words.

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