Friday, March 28, 2014

Violin - A Personification Comments

Rating: 4.5

She sleeps in her rose wood bed,
under a blanket of velvet red;
old and alone and forgotten,
she dreams of the love she once had.
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Elaine George
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HalIi Barry 04 April 2019

I love this poem i wish i was this talented.....

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Kate Wales 21 January 2018

I suppose it was ok but it was a tiny little bit too much to take in and it was all about love

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HalIi Barry 04 April 2019

Well yuou just mean

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Caleb Williams 24 February 2020

Are you angry because it's about something you don't have? And if so, why would you even read this poem?

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Colleen Courtney 29 March 2014

And I'm so glad writ it you did! This one is so beautiful! Written so well also. Thank goodness you saw that old violin! ! !

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Piyush Dey 28 March 2014

Nice try, lovely theme. flow of words were so nice. keep up the good work.

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